Pitch Feedback

I posted my pitch onto a Facebook page I made so that my peers could give me feedback on hat they thought of it. I will use this feedback as part of my progression when it comes to making my constructions. I now know to develop more on specifying a distinctive audience. 

All of this feedback seems to be positive but I do have areas of improvement. From this feedback I now see that by picking culture as my genre it will allow me to include lots of different ideas such as places, events, fashion and beauty. From these comments I can also see the I need to be more clear about my target audience. But since making this pitch I have changed my target audience from males and females to just females. I done this as I feel it will be easier to create my magazine only having a specific target audience. I think it would be a lot harder to do if I had a larger audience. This has really helped me develop my ideas because I now think that I am on the right track and can start to think of ideas for starting my constructions knowing that I have a set genre and target audience.